Last week, we showed you the first in a series of pages being drawn by Archie Sonic artist Tracy Yardley!, for the Sonic fan comic Sonic Eggs, a fan comic from Emerald Coast Comics, which updates every Saturday.
This comic is, apparently, the perfect example of what you can do wrong when writing a script: putting in too much detail and dialogue for an artist to put on a single page. You may notice this page is larger than the last one, and that’s because this was actually done on one and a half pages. So remember, whenever you are writing a comic script, take the space an artist has to work with into account. After all, not all of them are as cool and understanding as Tracy is!
This page was written by Jason Berry, and colored by Kichi.
This series starts in the middle of an ongoing storyline, which can be read from the beginning here.